Tuesday, February 12, 2008

#1
I chose Paul Brown's "Swinging". I think the authors central claim or agruement was to reflect on the life that this young man had past, present, and future. He talked about how he had made it out of Fayetteville and that was an accomplishment by looking at the trends and lifestyles that his friends had. The author used a lot of visual components, images of the back country, gorge, mountains and the typical good ole' boy to describe the situation. Metaphors were also a large part of the text. There was no instances of rhyme, rhythm or alliteration. I think the visual components of the text added to the main idea that the main speaker in the story had left his hometown.
#2
In Paul Brown’s, “Swinging” it is noted that very often, the main character has mentioned his almost escape from the previous life he used to have. In many ways, he was grateful for his opportunity since his friends were basically a model for what his life would have been like if he hadn’t gone to college. I would think to argue in this paper that the main character of this short story was revisiting a part of his life that was very familiar to him since in a way, since he had been able to escape.

2 comments:

Anna Mkhaylova said...

Christina,
You seem to have identified the main point of the story. However, it is not at all clear which passage you have chosen for close reading!
- “the visual components of the text added to the main idea that the main speaker in the story had left his hometown.” Which passage out of several present in the story would be a good example for this claim of yours? Could the same passage be used to talk about Steve’s relationship with his friends? What exactly has he escaped?
-“ the main character of this short story was revisiting a part of his life that was very familiar to him since in a way, since he had been able to escape.” What is that part of his life like? Is he happy to be away from it? Is he happy to be back? Which passage could prove it?

Melanie said...

I thought this story was kind of hard to narrow down, so I thought you did a good job of figuring out what it all meant. I also thought it was good that you noticed how the visual aspects were important in the story.